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Would anyone be willing to critique my site?
Hello everyone! I have put together my website myself (with the help of fellow Dgrinner's) and was wondering if anyone can tell me what I can do to make it better. Im relatively new to photography (about 4 years now) and even newer to the business behind it. I primarilly shoot weddings to help pay the bills and lately havent been rich enough to pay someone to do my site for me. I know my site is in desperate need of an overhaul and am not sure where to start or what to change.
Would you kindly take a look and pass some much needed judgement along my way? www.bryanbargerphotography.com Thank you so much!
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I can take a stab at it.
The homepage slideshow has a bunch of landscape pics (which are very nice by the way!). You say you shoot weddings mostly. You need to show weddings in the slideshow if that is what you want to sell. In other words, show what you want to sell on the homepage. The guest book takes you into la la land and there is no return to the homepage. A menu would help. Hope that helps!!
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I'll echo what Jon said. Great landscapes but there is a disconnect when you intersperse people and landscapes in the slideshow - are you are a landscape photographer or are you a for-hire portrait/wedding guy?
I would consider two websites for the two sides of you. For a portrait person, I'm looking for a bright (white) background with photos of babies, couples, seniors and weddings. I want to easily figure out a pricing page (and IMO a smugmug gallery for that doesn't work well). I would rename the Guestbook to an About me page. Consider a new headshot so people can see your face - that way they will recognize you when they see you. For landscape work, i think what you have works fine. Hope that helps. |
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I would set the view size so viewers can't see the full size pic. If I can see it I can steal it.
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If you're using your site as an introduction to the services you offer then I'd recommend adding a page describing your services. Placing your wedding pricing as a caption on the first photo of a gallery is not a good sales tool.
Your guestbook page is set to hide owner = yes, which removes all traces of you. At a minimum, set it to hide owner = no. If you're going to use a standard gallery style change from Journal to Journal (Old). That shows a smaller photo on one side with text next to it. And change the photo that you're using. If, as you indicated in your initial post, you are after wedding business, I would think a more formal photo would be better - or at least one where your face is visible. You have a Google+ button in your footer that takes the viewer to a g+ page saying that you haven't shared anything with the viewer. Either start posting on g+ (and make your posts public) or remove the link from your smug site. --- Denise
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You all are the best!!
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I cant thank you enough for pointing me in a better direction. I think it already is coming together. Thanks so much everyone!
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Awesome imagery. I agree with displaying more of what it is you are wanting to sell to your clients.
Just two more cents: Some images have watermarks and some dont. I would keep this consistant. I lean more toward not watermarking as they know they are looking at your site and if you right click protect the image, they cant copy them very easily. If you do decide to keep the watermark on the images, I would make them all the same. Some images have a little different watermark than others. Great thread, learned some insight I can also apply to myself. |
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Wildlife Photographer
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No doubt about it, you have some great images on your website Bryan, particularly like your landscapes and baby shots!
Pretty much everything I would have pointed out has already been pointed out by others above, so no point in me pointing them out again ![]() Keep up the good work and best of luck with your business |
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