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jberenba · Feb-15-2012, 10:22 AM #1

This is a lily curling up around its center. Any critiques or thoughts based on the challenge.

WhatSheSaw · Feb-15-2012, 12:42 PM #2

I like it! I tend to like abstracts.

You might try angling it a bit and have the lead in more off center.

SAMBALAM · Feb-15-2012, 05:32 PM #3

I am a big fan of abstract photography as well. I do like this picture a lot but I think for THIS competition, the picture would suffer because it is not easily recognizable. I agree that maybe a different angle would help.

tinamarie52 · Feb-18-2012, 09:00 AM #4

I see two vanishing points in this and they draw me in different directions. The obvious line is one, but the shape of the flower becomes conical on the right. It leads me right out of the image.

I think this needs to be brighter. It would also be stronger if you could use the Rule of Thirds.

chris

dnie · Feb-19-2012, 01:57 PM #5

I like it...

sapphire73 · Feb-20-2012, 04:59 PM #6

I agree that brightening it might be a good idea, but I like it!


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Feb-15-2012, 10:22 AM #1
jberenba ^OP Big grins Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Phil-th-adelphia Posts: 31	Any thoughts on this... This is a lily curling up around its center. Any critiques or thoughts based on the challenge. Attached Images __________________ Critiques always wanted and accepted. Say what you mean. Mean what you say. Joel Berenbaum http://joelberenbaum.smugmug.com

Feb-15-2012, 12:42 PM #2
WhatSheSaw Major grins Join Date: May 2009 Location: Wasington Posts: 2,135	I like it! I tend to like abstracts. You might try angling it a bit and have the lead in more off center.

Feb-15-2012, 05:32 PM #3
SAMBALAM Big grins Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Hanahan, SC Posts: 64	I am a big fan of abstract photography as well. I do like this picture a lot but I think for THIS competition, the picture would suffer because it is not easily recognizable. I agree that maybe a different angle would help.

Feb-18-2012, 09:00 AM #4
tinamarie52 Major grins Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Cary, North Carolina Posts: 918	I see two vanishing points in this and they draw me in different directions. The obvious line is one, but the shape of the flower becomes conical on the right. It leads me right out of the image. I think this needs to be brighter. It would also be stronger if you could use the Rule of Thirds. chris __________________ http://chrisadamczyk.smugmug.com When you come to a door... walk through it. If it's locked... find an open window.

Feb-19-2012, 01:57 PM #5
dnie Major grins Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: North Texas Posts: 1,339	I like it... __________________ Donna My SmugMug

Feb-20-2012, 04:59 PM #6
sapphire73 Major grins Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Pennsylvania, USA Posts: 1,229	I agree that brightening it might be a good idea, but I like it!


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