Pre-teen portrait session

MarcRaymond · February 5, 2015

A few favorites from a recent session with this wonderful young lady. C&C appreciated...

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M38A1 · February 7, 2015

I'm going with #3 as my favorite. Everything just seems to 'work' and work well with it.

Hackbone · February 8, 2015

Like #1 but try to keep the hair behind the eye socket to keep the shadow off the eye.

2. Has some crazy distortion between the head and lower body.

3 is very cute

4 to much negative space behind the subject, for me I need more room in front.

5 awkard head, shoulder, arm angle

Just my nits so take it with a grain of salt. What a cutie!!!!

MarcRaymond · February 9, 2015

M38A1 wrote: »

I'm going with #3 as my favorite. Everything just seems to 'work' and work well with it.

thank you

MarcRaymond · February 9, 2015

Hackbone wrote: »

Like #1 but try to keep the hair behind the eye socket to keep the shadow off the eye.

2. Has some crazy distortion between the head and lower body.

3 is very cute

4 to much negative space behind the subject, for me I need more room in front.

5 awkard head, shoulder, arm angle

Just my nits so take it with a grain of salt. What a cutie!!!!

thanks for the critique....regarding #4, would you have done just a tight portrait headshot?

Hackbone · February 9, 2015

I like 4 but for me the head turn is too severe for my liking and it makes the head appear odd.
Your colors are just super for my tastes by the way.

Pre-teen portrait session

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