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Concept - speed

amitgamitg Registered Users Posts: 97 Big grins
edited November 27, 2014 in Landscapes
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Please tell me your comments. Both positive and negative. I am a amateur photographer and will really appreciate all the help. thanks

Amit


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    bocoboco Registered Users Posts: 710 Major grins
    edited November 22, 2014
    mooi shot hoor.
    zou alleen dat lichte witte stukje tegen het kader rechtsboven wegwerken.
    grt,boco.
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    CavalierCavalier Registered Users Posts: 3,033 Major grins
    edited November 22, 2014
    From another amateur................................ bowdown.gif

    Great shot
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    amitgamitg Registered Users Posts: 97 Big grins
    edited November 23, 2014
    Cavalier wrote: »
    From another amateur................................ bowdown.gif

    Great shot

    Thanks !!!
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    karloznzkarloznz Registered Users Posts: 126 Major grins
    edited November 24, 2014
    I am really liking this photography - its is very effective in many aspects. The only comment I would make on an improvement is the right hand foreground is distracting me a little.
    Carl Lea Wedding and event photographer - Wellington - Web Site
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    amitgamitg Registered Users Posts: 97 Big grins
    edited November 24, 2014
    karloznz wrote: »
    I am really liking this photography - its is very effective in many aspects. The only comment I would make on an improvement is the right hand foreground is distracting me a little.

    Thanks !!! I Will try to get the next shot without the part of platform to compare.
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    amitgamitg Registered Users Posts: 97 Big grins
    edited November 24, 2014
    boco wrote: »
    mooi shot hoor.
    zou alleen dat lichte witte stukje tegen het kader rechtsboven wegwerken.
    grt,boco.


    Thanks. I will try the next shot with the modification you recommend.
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    roaddog52roaddog52 Registered Users Posts: 1,323 Major grins
    edited November 24, 2014
    A great concept. I have done some work similar to this. We know it's a train, but try catching a couple of images with the front of the train in the composition. It will still be blurred and give us the sense of speed and motion, but it will be defined a little better as a train also. I also agree with boco regarding the bright white light in the upper right corner being a bit of a distraction. Again, great work and congrats for getting out and experimenting. thumb.gifthumb

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    kdogkdog Administrators Posts: 11,680 moderator
    edited November 27, 2014
    Well, done. The foreground doesn't bother me, but you could crop a bit off the bottom I suppose. Just a thought, but if you do this shot again, you could consider using a flash and second curtain synch. If done right, you'll have a sharp image of the front of the train (or the back) and trailing blur.
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