Cody and Meg maternity

elkington photography · February 25, 2015

its been awhile since I last posted but I'm back. Feed back?

Foques · February 26, 2015

#2 isn't bad..

M38A1 · February 27, 2015

#2 seems strongest for me as well.... Just a really nice capture.

The rest, your subjects seem to get a bit lost in the vastness of the frame, and two white shirts side by side blend together on many. Maybe tone down the exposure a tad on last two?

But I'm confused more by the comment "been awhile since I last posted". You're showing this as your first post on dgrin, so where or under what userid are your other posts?

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Qarik · March 3, 2015

in general...
1) posing is awkward. Either the guy is leaning like he is about to fall over or the gal is.
2) processing, the very bright skies are taking away focus from subjects, some are just overexposed to begin with. In some shots the blacks are crushed so you can't see detail in the guys pants as well.
3) white balance is ranges from neutral to cool (overly so)
4) framing in the barn shots are too wide or include too much distracting elements (except #2)

I love the framing and colors in the "LOVE" shot..I wish there was more framed like this..for example they could just be strolling down the path holding hands or something.

elkington photography · March 4, 2015

Thanks for all the pointers. Now that i step back all the points you all have made make perfect sense.
M38A1 I had two or three account in witch I lost the screen name or password so I'm starting over.

Cody and Meg maternity

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