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Passion

toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
edited January 13, 2013 in Other Cool Shots
I've been busy... off in a different place

C&C appreciated

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Rags

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    black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,321 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2013
    You lost me on this one, buddy. There's too many elements...in too much disaray...to create and sustain any sense of passion. It's all fairly jumbled to my eye, due in no small part to the format of presentation.

    Welcome back,

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
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    EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2013
    Hi Rags.... good to see you posting!
    I always like to see you (anyone) creating, testing, trying..... though, as always (for all of us), YMMV.
    I agree with Tom to a degree - but I do get the sense of intimacy and voyeurism that I think you meant to convey.
    I like the concept of the torn-up edges revealing something below.
    Eric ~ Smugmug
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    toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2013
    Thanks for looking in and the comments guys

    I liked the torn pages for a couple of images. That was my second, this was my first, "Fashion"

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    Seems like I'm doing less photography nowadays; more image making (it's fun)

    I'll get back on track with my trip to India and Nepal in a few weeks
    Rags
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    EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2013
    torags wrote: »
    Thanks for looking in and the comments guys

    I liked the torn pages for a couple of images. That was my second, this was my first, "Fashion"

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    I'll get back on track with my trip to India and Nepal in a few weeks

    That's nice - a much more effective implementation of the idea.

    Wow! Have a safe and wonderful trip! Keep an eye out for the Yeti!
    Eric ~ Smugmug
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    black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,321 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2013
    To my mind, there's a lot more cohesion evidenced in the second shot....a much more effective presentation.

    Stay safe,

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
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