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ChrisFL · Jul-24-2012, 09:43 AM #1

http://olasanaflora.blogspot.com/

D3Sshooter · Jul-24-2012, 09:58 AM #2

Well almost a great picture, however two major elements prevent is:

1. The closed eyes, they are the window to the sole or is it soul. A fraction later or earlier and it would have been great.

2. The sharpening is bit over the top to make it a pleasant picture to look at.

The B&W conversion is well done and so is the DOF

ChrisFL · Jul-24-2012, 10:17 AM #3

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Originally Posted by D3Sshooter

Well almost a great picture, however two major elements prevent is:

1. The closed eyes, they are the window to the sole or is it soul. A fraction later or earlier and it would have been great.

2. The sharpening is bit over the top to make it a pleasant picture to look at.

The B&W conversion is well done and so is the DOF

Thank you for the critique. The eyes closed is one of the things that interests me about the photo, he was laughing so hard that he couldn't keep them open.

I will work on the sharpening though!

Mitchell · Jul-24-2012, 03:27 PM #4

Chris, I don't mind the closed eyes here, but I admit that seeing his eyes would have made this shot more interesting to me.

I do like the crop. It gives you a nice context into his surroundings.

I also feel it is a bit oversharpened. Sump.


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Jul-24-2012, 09:43 AM #1
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D3Sshooter Major grins Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Vlaanderen, Oudenaarde, Belgium Posts: 609	Well almost a great picture, however two major elements prevent is: 1. The closed eyes, they are the window to the sole or is it soul. A fraction later or earlier and it would have been great. 2. The sharpening is bit over the top to make it a pleasant picture to look at. The B&W conversion is well done and so is the DOF __________________ Canon is an experience , Nikon is a lifestyle.

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Mitchell Major grins Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Clearwater, Florida Posts: 3,019	Chris, I don't mind the closed eyes here, but I admit that seeing his eyes would have made this shot more interesting to me. I do like the crop. It gives you a nice context into his surroundings. I also feel it is a bit oversharpened. Sump. __________________ Mitch http://clearwaterphotography.smugmug.com/


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