Originally Posted by riz_sat hey iam posting this image from http://dgrin.com/showthread.php?p=653614#post653614 this topic of mine.

i've said it before, but:

Date Modified2007-10-10 22:09:50Date Taken2007-10-05 09:21:48CameraCanon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTiExposure Time0.01s (1/100)Aperturef/5.6ISO100

Originally Posted by Felicia Date Modified2007-10-10 22:09:50Date Taken2007-10-05 09:21:48CameraCanon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTiExposure Time0.01s (1/100)Aperturef/5.6ISO100

Thank you!
Seems a bit soft, or is it just me?

Originally Posted by Nikolai Thank you! Seems a bit soft, or is it just me?

I think it is a little soft, too. I was trying to capture the wrinkled skin around her eyes. I should probably have focused on the eyeball instead?

Originally Posted by Felicia I think it is a little soft, too. I was trying to capture the wrinkled skin around her eyes. I should probably have focused on the eyeball instead?

hi! i really like this picture of the (peacock?) eye but i agree that the focus has to be on the eye or somewhere where the eye is in the same focal plane as the focuspoint. nice try and try to shoot it again if possible

Originally Posted by Chrissiebeez_NL hi! i really like this picture of the (peacock?) eye but i agree that the focus has to be on the eye or somewhere where the eye is in the same focal plane as the focuspoint. nice try and try to shoot it again if possible

Thanks, Chrissiebeez. The bird is a Black Headed Caique. I'm gonna have to do some more shooting when I can get her to stay still. Here's some info: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black-headed_Parrot

Hi sorry for jumping straight to this one.
but i saw this today and just had to shoot it .
my little daughter Niamh letting a tear flow free looking at me deeply the emotion is so true i had to absolutly capture it and because its fresh jumped to this assignment.
even if it doesnt pass i thank you for letting share this with you :)

Originally Posted by bandit Hi sorry for jumping straight to this one. but i saw this today and just had to shoot it . my little daughter Niamh letting a tear flow free looking at me deeply the emotion is so true i had to absolutly capture it and because its fresh jumped to this assignment. even if it doesnt pass i thank you for letting share this with you :)

Thank you for your entry!
I would recrop it (too much of a "face-space" IMHO) and probably try a high contrast BW conversion.

Fantastic thanks for the feedback i will re post later

Originally Posted by Nikolai Thank you for your entry! I would recrop it (too much of a "face-space" IMHO) and probably try a high contrast BW conversion.

Thanks for the pass and also i tried what you said here is the next version

Originally Posted by bandit Thanks for the pass and also i tried what you said here is the next version

I think it's much better entry and a much better image

[FONT=Verdana]I bow down to your superiority what a dramatic change and such a better picture thanks to you.[/FONT]

Not sure if this is close enough to meet the assignment scope?

EXIF

Originally Posted by dlscott56 Not sure if this is close enough to meet the assignment scope? EXIF

Hi Dave!
Please look at these:
"The idea is to get an eye to fill as large part of the frame as possible. Watch for your own (and camera's) reflection - you may or may not like how it looks."
and tell me if it's close or not.