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DSS #100 - Travelers Hotel
I suddenly remembered this building earlier today. I would have preferred a different sky. I may try again if I get some better clouds this week.
I have three versions, all about the same, slightly different crops and processing. Do any of these stand out for anyone? Thanks for your input! 1. ![]() 2. ![]() 3.
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#2
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I like the second one. My only nit is the power lines. Maybe you could clone those out?
Sherry
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#3
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I think I like the lines of the first one best.
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#4
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Aaron, I am questioning the border myself... I like it, but not sure if it is within the border rules.
Sherry, I have reworked it to take out the lines. I had already taken out a light post and newspaper stand that were completely out of place. Greg, Thanks for the input. I was afraid that the right side on the 1st one would be a distraction. Here are my 2 updated versions. Do they need more age to them? 4. ![]() 5.
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#5
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I kinda LIKE the power lines in 'em. That makes it seem more real to me, for some reason.
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#6
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Thanks, That was my intent in leaving them when I took out the modern light pole. They looked like something I would see in an old street scene photograph. I am still going back and forth on it.
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Nice image...
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#8
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I like #1 best for the feeling of old and also like the power lines for authenticity
I think the border is OK the way it is - I have one too in my entry, but now.... hmmm ![]() we better ask Joyce. |
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#9
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Thanks Tatiana. The building on the right side looks ok to you then? I was concerned it looked to new.
The border, already asked |
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![]() Definitely leave the power lines in. |
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Right - I even haven't noticed the right side building as being distracting in any way - it doesn't look that modern, but yes, give it some brushes :) - Maybe you can try some more contrast too...
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#12
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now we are stretching my abilities. ok, off to figure it out. |
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#13
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Even if you don't wind up liking it or using it, at least you'll know how easy/difficult this is to accomplish in GIMP.
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#14
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It may very well be easy and I just haven't figured it out.
This one was easy just burning the areas, but not sure it is really what I was going for... but getting there. I am still searching for more options. 6.
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#15
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A little too much..., but getting closer :)
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#16
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Try fading it instead of burning it by adding this Vignette to your image: http://www.gimpology.com/submission/...vintage_effect
Scroll down to where you see Adding a Vignette and follow the directions there -- except where it says to fill your selection with black, fill it with white instead. If the white isn't cutting it, try changing it to the off white shade you have in thte photo. You may also want to experiment with the Feather selection. Try cranking it up to 250 of the setting of 150 doesn't look right to your eye. You can also erase sections of the vignette layer with a broad feathery brush to change the effect of the vignette. Just play, play, play. |
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Thanks Linda, I hadn't thought of fading it out... I will give that a shot next. They are all starting to blur together as I keep trying different things.
Here is the latest version that I have... I think I am leaning toward this version (at this moment anyway) 7. ![]() and here is a couple of versions of the light vignette... not too crazy about these. 8. ![]() 9.
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#18
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Try erasing the vignette on all but the section on the right. Also try changing the vignette layer opacity or change the blending mode from "Normal" to "Screen". See if that changes it somewhat more to your liking. You also don't have to use an oval-shaped vignette -- you can try a rectangle or a custom shape.
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#19
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I will probably play with it more later. I have got to walk away for awhile. So much I need to be doing and I have played all morning.
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#20
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The power lines are older than 1912
http://fredlocke.insulators.info/Por...ltipart_p3.htm In your new post, I like number 2. The color is better to me, but I don't like the tight crop to the roof on right side. |
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