Please Critique

[Sam]

I need a second or third or eight's opinion on this. I know what I think, well ok not all the time, but most of the time :D , but I would like to know what the rest of the world thinks. (only about this photo please. :): )

[gus]

G'day sam...my instant thoughts were nice shot, i like it but a bees doodle out of focus maybe.

[tmlphoto]

I need a second or third or eight's opinion on this. I know what I think, well ok not all the time, but most of the time :D , but I would like to know what the rest of the world thinks. (only about this photo please. :): )
Sam, The light, colors and motion blur are very nice. The composition is a little busy & I'm not sure what to focus on. Perhaps a crop could simplify and strengthen the composition. My 2 cents.

[3rdPlanetPhotography]

I must say a very nice shot as well... Color is well defined and layout is very nice but seems a bit busy. I'd say a crop is in store but I don't have a full 2 cents to give cause I can't tell where I'd crop.

Great Job... thanks for sharing :thumb
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[Sam]

G'day sam...my instant thoughts were nice shot, i like it but a bees doodle out of focus maybe.
The original is a tad sharper and a little lighter, but your right over all it is spft.

I just want to give you a friendly word of caution. When you come here for the Yosemite photo event, don't try and play with any of our bee's doodle's. They don't take kindly to that sort of thing. :D

Sam

[Sam]

Thaks everyone so far. This is the thing I need. I didn't notice the busy part.

Sam

[Phil U.]

I need a second or third or eight's opinion on this. I know what I think, well ok not all the time, but most of the time :D , but I would like to know what the rest of the world thinks. (only about this photo please. :): )

First thought: "Hey! Nice colors"

Second thought: "Oh, almost macro - that's different"

Third thought: "I'm looking all over it but haven't found anything to linger on - there doesn't seem to be a focal point."

Hope that helps...

[Andy]

Third thought: "I'm looking all over it but haven't found anything to linger on - there doesn't seem to be a focal point."

Hope that helps...

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keep shootin' sam!