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Angelo
Jul-01-2008, 11:46 AM
http://angelo.smugmug.com/photos/323645500_ZDbqL-L.jpg

Nikolai
Jul-01-2008, 12:29 PM
Shannon
Hey Angelino, long time no pics:-)
Nice composition, lovely expression, great sepparation from the bg! :thumb

Awais Yaqub
Jul-01-2008, 12:36 PM
Hello nice picture
I don't know why i feel it resembles to one in your avatar there is something that make me feel like that, pose or something :scratch
Anyway lovely smile

Angelo
Jul-01-2008, 03:45 PM
thanks guys. i appreciate the kind words.

qsjewl
Jul-01-2008, 05:18 PM
I really like this pic....it brought a smile to my face immediately. Her happiness is catchy and genuine...great capture!:thumb

Angelo
Jul-02-2008, 05:23 AM
I really like this pic....it brought a smile to my face immediately. Her happiness is catchy and genuine...great capture!:thumb

thank you

evoryware
Jul-02-2008, 05:25 AM
Nice capture of eyes and smile and tongue sticking through the teeth!

Angelo
Jul-02-2008, 08:12 AM
Nice capture of eyes and smile and tongue sticking through the teeth!

:scratch

I think she gets that from me

:dunno

thanks

eyeDutch
Jul-02-2008, 04:30 PM
A lovely and spontaneous smile indeed, but I find the lip gloss jumping out too much which isn't really flattering. I'd also use a fill flash, just a tiny bit of it, to make the contrast with the b/g a little less. -- Paul

Angelo
Jul-03-2008, 12:38 PM
A lovely and spontaneous smile indeed, but I find the lip gloss jumping out too much which isn't really flattering. I'd also use a fill flash, just a tiny bit of it, to make the contrast with the b/g a little less. -- Paul


ha! try telling a 21 y.o. what to wear or not wear! :huh

thanks for the comment

ChatKat
Jul-03-2008, 01:16 PM
Angelo

Lovely capture - love the bokeh and emotion. I thought maybe it was your gf...that's your daughter? Very pretty.

I agree a bit of fill would be nice, but, not 100% necessary. It works as is too.

joshhuntnm
Jul-03-2008, 07:18 PM
lovely shot. is it a bit blue, or is that just my bias toward warm coming through?

bfjr
Jul-03-2008, 08:34 PM
Hey Angelo :wave

Hey Shannon :wave

DavidS
Jul-05-2008, 11:29 AM
Beautiful smile.

cmorganphotography
Jul-07-2008, 06:18 AM
It looks a bit blue to me.:scratch
You can always tell her that ladies pinch and blot. I like the photo other than the high gloss lips and blue tint. She has a lovely jaw and would catch well with some full profile well lit from the front portraits. Her face shape pulls at her ears but her smile is so warm and full that it all works together.

I've been drawing people for a long time so if you want to know what i'm talking about take a print of a pic of the person you are shootng look for triangles, cirlces, squares, shapes of all sorts on the face. Circles are pool areas for light highlights and will take light well but blow out, triangles will bouce light to the right or left, etc.

Ed911
Jul-08-2008, 04:09 PM
Very nice. Next time think about bringing the eyes out more. Here you have no life in them. Nice smiley eyes, but no glitter. The eyes make a world of difference.

Also, your shot looks a little blue with muted skin tones. Like someone said before...a little fill flash will pop the skin and hit the eyes with some sparkle...putting the pop in the shot.