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Stumbled across this idea while walking this morning, this leaf stood out from the grass and the shape was well defined and I immediately thought 'geometry'
What do you think? It almost looks like its waving, so I thought for a title maybe 'a dying goodbye'
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/307480901_jTUp5-L.jpg
C&C appreciated
pyroPrints.com
Jun-04-2008, 07:05 PM
Stumbled across this idea while walking this morning, this leaf stood out from the grass and the shape was well defined and I immediately thought 'geometry'
What do you think? It almost looks like its waving, so I thought for a title maybe 'a dying goodbye'
C&C appreciated
It's not bad. I'd try for some more angles, possibly some different leaves.
You bkew out the highlights a little bit but it's not that big of a deal here. I'd punch up the levels a little bit, and maybe the colors (check out the Selective color adjustment layer)
Karrie McD
Jun-05-2008, 03:38 AM
and I immediately thought 'geometry'
Everywhere I turn I seem to be immediatly thinking....
ahh haa....geometry..... I wonder why....
nice picture but as stated you have blown out high lights...on the main subject....
it IS a very nice picture but maybe not ''wow factor''
I'm just trying to be honest with my opinion hope you don't mind....:D At least you are on to something...I still have nothing so far.
jwear
Jun-05-2008, 04:56 AM
good advice --but also look at your foreground the grass gives you a big blur on the right side of the leaf
richtersl
Jun-05-2008, 07:31 AM
How about trying to get a macro shot of all the "veins" in the leaf? There should be plenty of geometric designs there to make a composition out of. :D
And, no blown out highlights. :wink
Nikolai
Jun-05-2008, 08:02 AM
How about trying to get a macro shot of all the "veins" in the leaf? There should be plenty of geometric designs there to make a composition out of. :D
And, no blown out highlights. :wink
:agree
No rush there is still time :wink
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