Whatcha think?

[KTBoom2006-E510]

Walking down our street, I decided to take a quick pic of this lil girl... Comments?


http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m298/KTBoom2006/holly.png

[KTBoom2006-E510]

No comments?

[ladytx]

Sweet looking little girl .. nice capture here.

[KTBoom2006-E510]

Sweet looking little girl .. nice capture here.

Thanks, I was hoping someone would say something... lol, good or bad

[Seneca]

Katie...it's good, however try and get full face images instead of half body images. JMHO.

[super star]

Good shot and light..... but I would like to see her full face and also.. did you check your White balance of your camera ?? image looks blueish...

:thumb good work

-Super star:davidto

[KTBoom2006-E510]

My white balance was on outside sunshine.... I will try doing more headshots when I do a photoshoot.

[KTBoom2006-E510]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m298/KTBoom2006/_5226339.jpg



how's this one?

[super star]

This kinda.. compositions make your photography to next level.... :clap Really good.

--> BG yellow Distratcing alot since very close to subject... and also a wheel @ top.

--> Green bouncing light on your subject face...(not really worse but next time take care...about it)


Good attempt,,,,:thumb

Super star :davidto

[KTBoom2006-E510]

This kinda.. compositions make your photography to next level.... :clap Really good.

--> BG yellow Distratcing alot since very close to subject... and also a wheel @ top.

--> Green bouncing light on your subject face...(not really worse but next time take care...about it)


Good attempt,,,,:thumb

Super star :davidto



How do I get rid of the green bouncing off her face? I didn't use a reflector or a flash. And that was trash behind her, we were cleaning. :rofl

[super star]

How do I get rid of the green bouncing off her face? I didn't use a reflector or a flash. And that was trash behind her, we were cleaning. :rofl

Take a look at my Thread and tell me about my latest update...:deal

[beetle8]

I disagree with the full face crits on your first shot I think the comp is only slightly off but with the view you've give we get to see the jack in her hand which leads me into a story and I think that's a good thing. The color however is off in a bad way, the lilacs in the BG while out of the DOF should lend to the shot, but with the off WB the whole shot ends up losing. If you took this for a spin through photoshop it would be a definate keeper.

Saddly on the second one all I see is the trash can if it were going to be a journalistic kind of "we're cleaning" shot then you woulda had to back out and get more of the scene. for a candid portrait a step to the left maybe trying to eliminate the BG

[KTBoom2006-E510]

I disagree with the full face crits on your first shot I think the comp is only slightly off but with the view you've give we get to see the jack in her hand which leads me into a story and I think that's a good thing. The color however is off in a bad way, the lilacs in the BG while out of the DOF should lend to the shot, but with the off WB the whole shot ends up losing. If you took this for a spin through photoshop it would be a definate keeper.

Saddly on the second one all I see is the trash can if it were going to be a journalistic kind of "we're cleaning" shot then you woulda had to back out and get more of the scene. for a candid portrait a step to the left maybe trying to eliminate the BG


Besides the trash and wheel, is the focus good? In my last pics everyone said it was out of focus... so did I get it this time? That's what I was actually trying to do with my photos right now is practice with focusing. I am a person to do one step at a time.... I know, pathetic....:crazy

[ladytx]

Focus looks fine to me but maybe run it through Photoshop once for that little extra zap. It may look fine in Photoshop though. I know my photos look very sharp in Photoshop and Lightroom but then when I open them up in Windows Explorer or upload them here they are no longer sharp ... oh my, oh my, what are we to do? ... I don't know ... lol ...:rolleyes

[beetle8]

the focus on the first one is a little soft but it works with the shot the focus on #2 looks great.

[KTBoom2006-E510]

the focus on the first one is a little soft but it works with the shot the focus on #2 looks great.


Thanks