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junglejim
May-01-2008, 03:48 PM
This another poppy picture picture taken about the same time I took the poppy picture I posted a few weeks ago. critique and comments welcome.

http://junglejim.smugmug.com/photos/286771396_akPWE-XL.jpg

there are some additional pictures in the landscape section and still others at my knights ferry gallery here

http://junglejim.smugmug.com/gallery/4821283_5mJny/1/286771396_akPWE

Osprey
May-02-2008, 04:10 AM
Nice but maybe a little tighter crop removing soome of the upper right background. It seems almost 50% of the pic now??

Halite
May-02-2008, 10:20 AM
Pretty image. The bright sidelight and shallow depth of field give it an pleasant, romantic quality. I could see this on the front of a Mother's Day card.

I think the crop works fine. My eye appreciates all that dark space to counterbalance the bright yellow mass on the left. If it were my image, though, I might try emphasizing some of the violet undertones in that dark space ever so slightly in post-processing so that it doesn't come off as too neutral or dull. I think the yellow would pop even more if it had its complementary color to vibrate against.