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starky987
Apr-21-2008, 08:13 PM
Shot in Central Park over Spring Break.
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2500/michellipgx2.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=michellipgx2.jpg)

I wish I had not cut the top of her head off but this was not a planned shot, it was just taken.

Sorry about the weird method of attaching, just click the thumbnail for a larger picture.
Thanks!

SloYerRoll
Apr-22-2008, 08:34 AM
I'm going to be brutally honest here. This isn't meant to be rude. Just the truth from my perspective.

Did you adjust the girl for lighting angle to the sun?
Did you consider angles and composure?
Did you consider the fact that the background is busy and doesn't add anything to the picture?

To me, this is a snapshot. There's not really anything in this shot that's portfolio worthy.

-Jon