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KWDLEO
Apr-02-2005, 03:56 PM
One of my favorites...except left eye is a little clouded.
Allen
Apr-02-2005, 04:04 PM
Your timing was a bit off, she was licking her lips in preparation for the shot.:rofl
This is a very nice shot.
Your sig catches my eye and is a distraction. I would suggest in this pic,
because of the vast white area, to place it closer to the corner and
lighten it up so it's just varely visable.
Great capture.
Al
KWDLEO
Apr-02-2005, 04:17 PM
Your timing was a bit off, she was licking her lips in preparation for the shot.:rofl
This is a very nice shot.
Your sig catches my eye and is a distraction. I would suggest in this pic,
because of the vast white area, to place it closer to the corner and
lighten it up so it's just varely visable.
Great capture.
Al
That's what I'm talking about...good call, thanks. How's this?
Allen
Apr-02-2005, 05:31 PM
That's what I'm talking about...good call, thanks. How's this?
Much better, now I can stare and hold my concentration. My dad had The Encycopedia of Photography volumes from back in the 40-50's and as a kid I spent many days reading about composition. I was most facinated by the way the eye flows around a picture. In your picture there was no connecting element from the main object to your sig but it stood out enough to grab my eye.
Again much nicer now, maybe too light, only needs to be light enough to not interfer.
Thanks for sharing,
Al
Harryb
Apr-02-2005, 06:18 PM
Excellent pic. I like the comp and the shallow DOF.
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