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Khaos
Apr-01-2005, 07:33 PM
At first I liked this one, now I'm not so sure. Comments needed. Thanks.
http://khaos.smugmug.com/photos/18732486-L.jpg
Mitchell
Apr-01-2005, 07:49 PM
I like this one, but I'm a sucker for train track pics. The B&W treatment works well. I particularly like how you lead the viewer to the interesting bridge in the distance.
mitch
bfjr
Apr-02-2005, 02:39 AM
Been looking to take of few of these "Tracks going away". This one nice in B&W, but I think it lacks a visual element.
Example: a person walking down the tracks would have given a visual reference as to size a bridge and distance from front to back. Just my 2 :dunno
Khaos
Apr-02-2005, 06:58 AM
Been looking to take of few of these "Tracks going away". This one nice in B&W, but I think it lacks a visual element.
Example: a person walking down the tracks would have given a visual reference as to size a bridge and distance from front to back. Just my 2 :dunno
Thanks, I couldn't put my finger on what was missing, but that's it, no true interesting focal point to go with the tracks.
My intent was what Mitchell saw, but the bridge didn't hold as much interest due to the distance.
gsgary
Apr-02-2005, 07:26 AM
This is the only tracks picture i have,Taken on a trip to Poland last year it was very moving (Auscwitz-Birkenau)
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