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SteveLongPhoto
Mar-28-2005, 08:20 AM
She's hiding under the kitchen table while Easter dinner is being prepared.
http://stevelongphoto.smugmug.com/photos/18364490-L.jpg
I'm trying to develop a PP that creates a soft image without losing detail. Shot with my S1 Pro, 50mm 1.4 lens at f2. Appreciate any comments.
Angelo
Mar-28-2005, 08:50 AM
Steve:
This a very nice shot of a beautiful little girl. The lighting seems perfect and the DOF is near perfect. Only thing I might have tried is getting lower, to her level, rather than shooting down at her. Getting her elbow in frame and maybe cropping a bit off the top. :thumb
SteveLongPhoto
Mar-28-2005, 01:21 PM
Steve:
This a very nice shot of a beautiful little girl. The lighting seems perfect and the DOF is near perfect. Only thing I might have tried is getting lower, to her level, rather than shooting down at her. Getting her elbow in frame and maybe cropping a bit off the top. :thumb
Thanks for the feedback. I tend to frame my main subject and forget about the rest of the composition. It's something i need to remind myself about.
lynnma
Mar-29-2005, 01:29 AM
Thanks for the feedback. I tend to frame my main subject and forget about the rest of the composition. It's something i need to remind myself about.thats lovely steve, I agree with Angelo, that would have made a beautiful shot perfect :clap
marlof
Mar-29-2005, 01:51 AM
I too like the picture. About the angle: going down to her level might be an option, but I also like the current perspective. I mean right now, the top/down angle really shows you she's hiding under a table, and the way it looked to you as a grown up. If you'd change the angle, you'd see what it is hiding under the table from her side of things. Both options have something going for it.
shaman
Mar-29-2005, 03:00 AM
Good, very good...:clap
If the camera was turned 90 degrees, to still retain the table top & include her elbow...?
shaman
SteveLongPhoto
Mar-29-2005, 06:56 PM
Thanks for all the suggestions. I just really need to look at the edges of the composition and make sure I've got everything before I push the button.
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