The theme was "surface" C&C is very usefull.

[Arvan]

Im going to apply a photagraphy school so this is 2 pics i might send in. The theme is surface so this is what i came out with so far.

First one is a rainy window. Shot with my nos sold Pentax 50mm f/1.4 @ 1.4.

second one is actually me =)..uberphotoshopped ofc. The wierd lookin texture in my eye is actually from a washingmashine i shot months ago..


http://arvan.smugmug.com/photos/243282257-XL.jpg



http://arvan.smugmug.com/photos/243282208-XL.jpg

C&C plz =)

[Skippy]

Im going to apply a photagraphy school so this is 2 pics i might send in. The theme is surface so this is what i came out with so far.

First one is a rainy window. Shot with my nos sold Pentax 50mm f/1.4 @ 1.4.

second one is actually me =)..uberphotoshopped ofc. The wierd lookin texture in my eye is actually from a washingmashine i shot months ago..
C&C plz =)

All the best for the application into the Photography School Arvan :thumb

That second shot with you in it is creepy, like a shot from a Thriller :huh
The eyes look great ... well done! .... Skippy :D
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[Arvan]

All the best for the application into the Photography School Arvan :thumb

That second shot with you in it is creepy, like a shot from a Thriller :huh
The eyes look great ... well done! .... Skippy :D
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Thanx skippy, you allways take your time =).

Any changes that you think i might do?. Want it to be perfect :dunno

[Chrissiebeez_NL]

like em both but not so fond about the name in the first one. its to photoshoppy and IMO takes away from the strenght of the simplicity.

in the second photo, maybe you could make the vissible areas a bit less round. it is a strong image for sure and the 'looking through a hole' thing certainly adds but its also a bit limiting in not having your eyes explore the rest of the image.

just my view.

good luck and hope you make it in!:clap

[Arvan]

Hmm that´s good critique..Il do a reprocess of it tonight. =) will try some trix i have in my bag :D