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eoren1
Jan-13-2008, 02:50 PM
Missed a few LPS rounds as work life became rather complicated (decided to leave my job in DC and move back to Boston). Had an idea for this round using my two month old and my wife's ring.

Titles:
Diamonds are a girl's best friends
or
Growing up fast

http://eoren1.smugmug.com/photos/242932558-L.jpg

http://eoren1.smugmug.com/photos/242932915-L.jpg

Any thoughts?
Thanks,
E

Greensquared
Jan-13-2008, 05:10 PM
I really like the first one, however all the pink is a tad distracting. Perhaps cropping a bit off the bottom might help. Neat idea...and welcome back!

leaforte
Jan-13-2008, 05:27 PM
I like the first one. In the second, the diamond ultimately stills the show.

eoren1
Jan-13-2008, 05:32 PM
Thanks for the comments Emily.
How's this?

http://eoren1.smugmug.com/photos/243103213-L-0.jpg

Greensquared
Jan-13-2008, 06:09 PM
I like the crop, but prefer the color version, along with the "Girls Best Friend" title (which needs the pink hint in the background!). :D

pyroPrints.com
Jan-13-2008, 06:49 PM
I like the second color one

eoren1
Jan-13-2008, 07:02 PM
Another try:
Took the photo into CS3 and used that Ortony effect as well as cloned out the dark background to make it a bit more high-key.
http://eoren1.smugmug.com/photos/243148468-L-0.jpg

Any better? More thoughts/suggestions?
I really appreciate it!
E