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lark
Mar-15-2005, 08:51 PM
I'll get there ..........we still have time........waddya think this time?
lark
Mar-15-2005, 08:52 PM
or even more minimal.......
lark
Mar-16-2005, 07:21 AM
...or maybe just one....
lark
Mar-16-2005, 07:22 AM
....or even MORE minimal.....
ginger_55
Mar-16-2005, 07:52 AM
great series. i like the last one. i think there are some dark spots on the white from erasing.
but i like it.
ginger
Charlie Brown
Mar-16-2005, 08:37 AM
ok id like to see a mixture of the third and fourth shots. i like the composition of the third, but likt the size of the tree in the fourth. so how about a bigger tree in number three. oh and if the glove doesnt fit you must acquit!
charlie
rahmonster
Mar-16-2005, 01:12 PM
I like the third one the best. interesting but very minimal. All the open space gives it a good minimal feel I think.
lark
Mar-17-2005, 05:16 AM
thanks for the suggestions everyone!
I think the third one is best also, and Charlie's suggestion would give it a little more balance I bet..we'll see. If nothing comes up in the next few days this one will probably be it.
Thanks to everyone who commented on all the pics I threw up here! I must admit, this has been a "challenge" as I tend to overcrowd my pictures(must fill up every little space with something meaningful, you know the trapLOL). Maybe I will appreciate "space" more now.
Den
joechiu
Mar-17-2005, 06:08 AM
How about rotating the palm tree (or even distorting the tree trunk a bit to make it curved) so that the tree starts out near the lower right, but keep much more of the top, like picture #2? Also, your white background needs cleaning up, I think.
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