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MarkTodd
Jan-10-2008, 06:24 PM
Last LPS was an absolute bomb for me, so I'm back to exploring the dark side. I'm calling it "Nightmare". Anyone feeling it? :dunno

http://marktodd.smugmug.com/photos/241998676-XL.jpg
shatch
Jan-10-2008, 06:47 PM
Hey Mark,

You have my attention. Erie, moody, mysterious. I just wish I could think like a judge. For that, I can't help you. I can only recommend what I try... and that is "go with your heart, then regret it later if you were wrong and celebrate if you were right".:scratch

Good luck!
pyroPrints.com
Jan-10-2008, 08:23 PM
That's some scary $*!% =c) Love it. Only thing is, I find myself finding that it was sharper (all parts of it not just the forehead)
navigator72
Jan-11-2008, 04:47 AM
Just what I needed after hearing strange noises coming out of the woods last night.
I'm buying a gun
swintonphoto
Jan-11-2008, 04:52 AM
creepy man...
Tentacion
Jan-11-2008, 05:41 AM
Wowsa....Love the feel...but might I make a tiny suggestion...I think the "Mood" would come across stronger, if you had a touch more light to the "fangs" sort of like a "glistening gleam"...(gees I hope I used the right verbs to describe what I mean).

I would be SCARED if I saw that profile and then saw the gleam of the Yellow/White teeth...(like a "Wolf In The Night")

Nice job.
MarkTodd
Jan-11-2008, 07:01 AM
Thanks for the comments and suggestions everyone. Cousin Sweeney said no to a reshoot (he did invite me over for a free shave though) so I just applied a few adjustments.

http://marktodd.smugmug.com/photos/242131702-XL.jpg
pyroPrints.com
Jan-11-2008, 08:04 AM
http://marktodd.smugmug.com/photos/242131702-XL.jpghttp://marktodd.smugmug.com/photos/241998676-XL.jpg

It's better. Could be sharper, but there is only so much you can do if the barber won't do a reshoot.
MarkTodd
Jan-11-2008, 05:42 PM
Pyro, do you think this one is any better?

http://marktodd.smugmug.com/photos/242296454-XL.jpg
pyroPrints.com
Jan-12-2008, 07:51 AM
Pyro, do you think this one is any better?



not sure the added texture help =c/ I think your previous try was closer =c)
shutterdad
Jan-12-2008, 08:26 PM
Great shot. Very artistic. Yes, maybe could lighten up around fangs? Never regret. Always go forward with head high. Your work is more important than others opinions. Stay true.
Awais Yaqub
Jan-13-2008, 08:24 AM
:yikes
You just scared me
Great picture
MarkTodd
Jan-14-2008, 07:09 PM
I've reverted back to the previous version as suggested and tried to lighten up the teeth. Good? Bad?

http://marktodd.smugmug.com/photos/243578341-XL.jpg