minimalism? 3rd time lucky?

[rahmonster]

Ok, so this is my third try, thankyou for all the crutique I'm learning alot doing this challenge....Using this as my guide:

minimalism: 1: A school of abstract art that emphasises extreme simplification of form, by using basic shapes primary colours etc.
2:Use of the fewest or barest essentials.

I came up with these...Just look for opinions and critique.

thanks everyone.

stove handles (img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism017copy.jpg)

Gem (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism048copy.jpg)

Fronds (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism006.jpg)

fenced (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism004.jpg)

Hope they worked....I'm still figuring this all out.

[Photosbychuck]

Ok, so this is my third try, thankyou for all the crutique I'm learning alot doing this challenge....Using this as my guide:

minimalism: 1: A school of abstract art that emphasises extreme simplification of form, by using basic shapes primary colours etc.
2:Use of the fewest or barest essentials.

I came up with these...Just look for opinions and critique.

thanks everyone.

stove handles (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism017copy.jpg)

Gem (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism048copy.jpg)

Fronds (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism006.jpg)

fenced (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism004.jpg)

Hope they worked....I'm still figuring this all out.
Hi, rahmonster
I like the Fronds & the fenced photos. :thumb

Good Luck with the contest.

Take Care,
Chuck,

[Angelo]

Hi, rahmonster
I like the Fronds & the fenced photos. :thumb

Good Luck with the contest.

Take Care,
Chuck,
Ditto! :thumb

[rahmonster]

I edited the fronds, it now looks like this...

Which I think I like better this way, let me know what you think.

[landrum]

My favorite is "Gem". I like it's simplicity and color. "Fenced" I think I'd like better if the fence tie wasn't showing in the upper right.

[shaman]

Gem... very minmal... sparse... empty...

shaman

[Salt]

I like the fronds shot. I'd like to see it on a clear day though - I'm just thinking that a clear blue sky would be more minimalist. :dunno

Oh, and also, just one set of fronds. The second set behind the first adds too much to me. Just the simple lines of one frond, with a clear blue sky....

[gpgold]

Ok, so this is my third try, thankyou for all the crutique I'm learning alot doing this challenge....Using this as my guide:

minimalism: 1: A school of abstract art that emphasises extreme simplification of form, by using basic shapes primary colours etc.
2:Use of the fewest or barest essentials.

I came up with these...Just look for opinions and critique.

thanks everyone.

stove handles (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism017copy.jpg)

Gem (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism048copy.jpg)

Fronds (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism006.jpg)

fenced (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/moreminimalism004.jpg)

Hope they worked....I'm still figuring this all out.
I like the gem also - it has great simplicity.

regards,

Gary

[joechiu]

I like the fronds - but I agree that it would be better without the 2nd one...
The fronds remind me of Venetian blinds. I imagined a window frame around it...

The gem picture looks too noisy and OOF to me...:dunno

[rahmonster]

I agree about the fronds, but I wont be able to reshoot for a few days as a big bank of lovely autumn weather has just blown in and its wet wet wet!

I am working on a cleaner version of the Gem.

Thanks for the comments.