For LPS 19 I'm older, I'm smarter, I'm cuter

[Joe Lynch]

First attempt, critique welcomed

http://joelynch.smugmug.com/photos/238527105-L.jpg

Exif here http://joelynch.smugmug.com/photos/newexif.mg?ImageID=238527105

[HoofClix]

Love to give some ideas, but just can't see it. Check to see that your gallery is set to allow external links. You'll also get a lot more comment if you could link it right into the post.

Great Luck!

[Joe Lynch]

Fixed the link. Sorry, I think they were having some troubles about the time I posted and couldn't see I had a problem.
Joe

[Shudderz]

cute picture....but they seem a bit too red/pink maybe try white balancing off of the girl's shirt?

[Joe Lynch]

Yep, Shudderz, thanks, and I will back off the saturation some to minimize the red blotches. I can see I need to do that on a different computer.

I changed and I hope fixed the white balance, uploaded and updated the links.

Joe

[Joe Lynch]

OK, I think I see what my problem is. Everyone is shooting pictures specifically for the contest and I tried to adapt a very recent portrait to the contest that doesn't really have anything to do with the theme.

Sometimes even lack of feedback really is feedback. I'll see if I can't come up with something a little more interesting, but, I'm an engineer with out much visual imagination, so it may be difficult.

[HoofClix]

I can see now, and well, there's something going on inside here head. Not sure what but it's there, so good luck!