Beauty + urban in Columbus

[old soul]

From this summer with my now broken p&s

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2382/2125324782_b8c3511f6f.jpg?v=0

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1125/542992223_ca07b4b983.jpg?v=0



http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1068/792883971_e5886fc750.jpg?v=0

I really like this shot, despite the pile of unkown substances. Do you think the metal ring frame w/n frame works?



Thanks for looking! Critiques/likes and ideas for improvement would be great!

[Cantfeelmyfingers]

1st photo- too grainy and personally I'd like to see more of the lady.
2nd photo- her toes look a little TOO distorted from the water, looks more like a claw than toes lol
3rd photo- the ring does NOT work for me I just feel like your hand strap fell in front of the lens.. Cute girl, but the ring is too distracting.

[DeuceFour]

1st photo- 55 gallon drum is in focus, her not so much, good idea though. and the metal frame in the third photo dosn't work for me!

[gefillmore]

sorry about the broken camera-

like the photo with the leg in the water-

[Kayguarnay]

I actually really like that the girl in #1 is not in focus and the fact that it's not centered. She looks witty. Pretty nice shot given the fact that you couldn't really re-compose it with a P&S!

The foot looks like it has a tatoo on it and it draws the eyes away from the distortion and leaves the viewer curious (imho).

I like the ring in the third picture, (having taken a few in a similar fashion). if it was shifted just a little over, it would make a really nice "illuminator" view on what you were capturing.

Good work!

[frg]

:agree Love the first shot, I think you've done really well.......