Assisted a wedding

[anwmn1]

Assisted another wedding and tried out off camera flash for the first time-

1. Bride was beautiful

http://aaronnewman.smugmug.com/photos/229516198-XL.jpg

2.
http://aaronnewman.smugmug.com/photos/229517579-XL.jpg

3. The Escape (could still use some cropping)

http://aaronnewman.smugmug.com/photos/229520515-L.jpg

4. The whole family

http://aaronnewman.smugmug.com/photos/229515319-XL.jpg

[gefillmore]

aaron-

I like #3 with the blur treatment-

#4 is nice except I'm seeing a little too much red-

[nicoleshilliday]

You are right...very beautiful bride.

I think like the idea of #2 but think it needs more of the music in the shot. Can you re-crop?

[Travis]

I like #4; however, it has definite slant to the right and can use some leveling.

[anwmn1]

aaron-

I like #3 with the blur treatment-

#4 is nice except I'm seeing a little too much red-

Thank you gelfillmore for the comments.

I'll see about adjusting the red on the faces without blowing out the bride

[anwmn1]

You are right...very beautiful bride.

I think like the idea of #2 but think it needs more of the music in the shot. Can you re-crop?

Thanks Nicole but unfortunately this is as taken - no crop. Something to work on next time.

[anwmn1]

I like #4; however, it has definite slant to the right and can use some leveling.

Thanks Travis- I see that now too.

I seem to tilt that way alot with my shots - even landscapes. :scratch