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canonguy
Mar-11-2005, 12:24 AM
Hello all. I am thinking of submitting this one. I showed it before and I have cleaned it up based on some comments from b4. Let me know what you think.

http://peart.smugmug.com/photos/17277431-M.jpg


Needless to say, after I shot this, I had problems sleeping with the loght off. I kept hearing strange noises on the house.:humungus :grim


Here is another possible entry. It's the side of a glass building. Unfortunately the day was partly cloudy, messing up my minimal attempt somwhat. Going to try again when I get a clear day.

http://peart.smugmug.com/photos/17323341-M.jpg

lynnma
Mar-11-2005, 03:20 AM
Hello all. I am thinking of submitting this one. I showed it before and I have cleaned it up based on some comments from b4. Let me know what you think.

http://peart.smugmug.com/photos/17277268-M.jpg


Needless to say, after I shot this, I had problems sleeping with the loght off. I kept hearing strange noises on the house.:humungus :grimThats an interesting shot canonguy..I missed that other one so I can't comment on the differences. Definitely makes me wonder whats on the other side.. for me I'm not sure is says minimalism tho but it may to everyone else.:D

Gator
Mar-11-2005, 05:04 AM
Very cool!

digital faerie
Mar-11-2005, 12:31 PM
Very cool!
pic isn't showing :uhoh

canonguy
Mar-11-2005, 11:33 PM
pic isn't showing :uhoh
fixed!

purified
Mar-11-2005, 11:50 PM
I really like it! It definitely gets my attention. Ooooo! :uhoh :rofl

I can't think of anything to change.

digital faerie
Mar-12-2005, 07:45 AM
Very cool!
awesome! although I think I would get rid of the light spilling onto the wall on the right side, that way it's just the door, and the light and that's all. I think it would make the room appear bigger (making me think, just how big is it) and emphasize the curiosity of "what's on the other side?"

:clap