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BladeFlap
Nov-12-2007, 05:34 PM
I'm open to all opinions.
I'm not a Photoshop user, just LR for now, so keep that in mind please.
http://lh6.google.com/bminnear/RzkA3T2X9DI/AAAAAAAAA9I/QFAbjwYEqs0/s800/20071101-IMG_0707.jpg
Miguel Delinquento
Nov-12-2007, 10:01 PM
Well this shot is interesting in spite of being too dark. But it is still too dark and the contrast is way too minimal. I also think the foreground is too black. There are too few compelling shapes to serve as effective silohettes. Still I like the shape of the clouds and their continuity across the frame is pretty cool.
What kind of LR preset did you use here? Perhaps another one would work better.
M
BladeFlap
Nov-13-2007, 03:28 PM
I'm not sure if it's really considered a "preset" since I only worked on one image but...
I shot some clouds on the horizon that were interesting.
Cropped out much of the sky.
Did a grayscale conversion and tweaked the blacks and lights and contrast till I had the look I liked.
I wasn't going for visual realism. Just wanted to showcase the clouds.
I played with lightening the foreground. I didn't like the result.
Thanks for your suggestions.
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