What do you think

[trippy64]

I actually had these for the challenge 31, but made them a week late. I can re-shoot so I hit the challnge date, but would like to know if they fit for this challenge before I do?? Comments on technical, composition and/or does it capture the theme? Or maybe, I don't like this because.....


http://trippy64.smugmug.com/photos/17085875-M.jpg


http://trippy64.smugmug.com/photos/17085858-M.jpg

Thanking you in advance.

[Angelo]

hmmmm, I can't tell if they would pass. Is it fair to ask Andy?

[Bert]

I would eliminate five of the candles. Just one with that background would work. I like the bottom right candle but would put in somewhere close to the top left position.

[aero-nut]

I would eliminate five of the candles. Just one with that background would work. I like the bottom right candle but would put in somewhere close to the top left position.
Yeah, I agree. I think it's a little busy with multiple candles. Maybe even just part of one candle would be better....

[Charlie Brown]

of the two i like the second shot. i like the color of the candles in that onw as opposed to the rather bland creme color in the first. that being said id love to see a single candle, the color of the ones in the second shot, with the tip of the candle and flame reaching into the lower far right of the picture.


charlie

[snapapple]

Yep, I agree. Keep it to one object. I like the brighter color too.

[ginger_55]

Yup, Snappy said it again.

ginger