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John Mueller
Mar-04-2005, 04:51 PM
Been playing with this one.Havent got what I want.
Want to title it "My Heart" or "Her Heart"
Thoughts? Does it show emotion?
John

http://MHJ.smugmug.com/photos/16904357-M.jpg
wxwax
Mar-04-2005, 05:03 PM
It's a nice shot with some cool PS. But I don't get any emotion out of it.
Jenny
Mar-04-2005, 05:21 PM
I agree. This is a really cool shot, but I don't really think the lock or fence is feeling any emotion, and I don't really feel an overpowering emotion looking at it either.:dunno
Angelo
Mar-04-2005, 05:22 PM
it's a nice shot and a cool idea but execution and presentation will make or break this. What's the perfect title? Should you incorporate the title into the photo?
John Mueller
Mar-04-2005, 06:08 PM
Aw,the emotion of no emotion around my heart:D
Maybe this would be better off in the mini thingy thats coming up next:dunno
Thanks,John
Khaos
Mar-04-2005, 06:26 PM
I think for minimalism you need to either go with the lock or the fence, not both.
joechiu
Mar-04-2005, 07:00 PM
Hi MHJS,
I like the look. However, the fringes on the interface between the chain/lock and the background pops out at me on my monitor. It seems like you may need to feather and/or shink the selection area and touch up the whites, replacing it so that it's more consistent with the darker background.
Also, conceptually, the lock around the chain link doesn't work very well since the lock isn't really locking anything.
I'd like to see what you can do with this!
Joseph