Hannah

[itscritical]

I took these for a story. the one that her face is out of focus is because the story is about her being jewish so i focused on her necklace but still kept enough definition to tell who it is.

[itscritical]

This is the second time.

[Khaos]

I like the first one, but to me, the second one has too much that is out of focus. Perhaps a smaller aperture would of been better?

[rutt]

Both have a kind of oil painting feel, so the focus issue doesn't really bother me. I always like to see eyes, and when I don't I think there is a message. In this case, perhaps she is shy or demur?

The second shot is quite striking. You are in very close and the angle is unusual.