dear harry and all

[itscritical]

Please check these out and all i ask for some response. i am young and i would love feedback.

[itscritical]

another

[itscritical]

another one

[itscritical]

one more

[DoctorIt]

Hello and welcome... just two suggestions: can you post to another site and just link the photos (attachments get hard to work with)? second, these are all pretty small, hard to comment on anything but general composition.

[Harryb]

Hi Phillip,

The shots are kind of small so its hard to say much. How are you doing with your D70?

Harry

[itscritical]

Hi Phillip,

The shots are kind of small so its hard to say much. How are you doing with your D70?

Harry
first thank you for answering my post and second i really wish i had a canon digital instead of Nikon but my high school has given me the d70 all year with two lenses without charge or anything so it works. And last, the images are small because originally there were too big so i had to scale them down but most of them are on my website at philipbaack.com and if not ill have them on by tommorow.

[wxwax]

The D70's a great camera, nothing to apologize for, lots of folks would kill to have one.

From what I can see, you have really nice background blur, and your exposures are well handled. Subject matter's nice without being special.

My biggest feedback would be your composition. Looks like you always put your subject in the center of the frame. I assume you've learned about the rule of thirds? Using it would make these shots even better. Much more dynamic to put your subject on a third.

Keep 'em coming, itscritical! :thumb

[johno]

I looked at your web site... you have some GREAT SHOTS. Good colors and perspective. High school huh? Well, you're on your way to a wonderful start.

Look out Andy!:rofl

Doc is right... If you can link the image to your post. It will help.

peace.
johno~

[itscritical]

how do you post a website instead of attaching my photos?
i am new to this thing so help would be awesome
thanks for comments its nice to hear anything back on your photos because there is always room for improvement.

philip

[johno]

You need a place to host your own pics. When you want to drop a pic in your post hit the little icon above the text box that looks like a mountain. You will need to type the address that is hosting your pic.

Example without brackets
IMGhttp://www.youthimpact.com/photography/miriamplay-small.jpg/IMG

When posted it looks like this
http://www.youthimpact.com/photography/miriamplay-small.jpg

hope that helps.

peace.
johno~

[itscritical]

You need a place to host your own pics. When you want to drop a pic in your post hit the little icon above the text box that looks like a mountain. You will need to type the address that is hosting your pic.

Example without brackets
IMGhttp://www.youthimpact.com/photography/miriamplay-small.jpg/IMG

When posted it looks like this
http://www.youthimpact.com/photography/miriamplay-small.jpg

hope that helps.

peace.
johno~


thanks. i think that will help

philip

[Angelo]

I looked at your website too...... :doh

get out of here you rotten little kid :rambo

I'm NEVER gonna win a challenge!!! :booze

[johno]

I looked at your website too...... :doh

get out of here you rotten little kid :rambo

I'm NEVER gonna win a challenge!!! :booze

HA :rofl :rofl :rofl :rofl Angelo, you are so funny. You make me laugh.

Don't worry Angelo, at the end of the school year his camera goes back to the school... You get to keep yours and make payments for it. :D

peace.
johno~