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USAIR
Feb-27-2005, 09:18 AM
Shot this the other day at the Krohn Conservatory(Cincinnati Ohio)
Students from an art class, this girl let me shoot her but others were shy.
Not shot very well but I have just started photographing people
Would like to get better at candids but we will see.

http://www.riverbendphotos.com/photos/16532564-L.jpg

Comments?

Thanks
Fred

Angelo
Feb-27-2005, 10:00 AM
I like this very much. Beyond the strangeness happening in her hair, which you may not have had control over, I like that you're focused on her drawing and everything else falls OOF. Really does the job leading your eye to her work. :thumb

Dee
Feb-27-2005, 10:14 AM
Very nice lighting too! I love the bunch of colored pencils out of focus while the drawing hand and background is in focus.

USAIR
Feb-27-2005, 11:18 AM
I really wanted to take a few more photos
I wanted to do one with all in focus and play with lighting(exposure)
But I was messing up her concentration.

Well maybe next time

Fred

Michiel de Brieder
Feb-27-2005, 01:20 PM
I really like the idea of the usage of DOF! It's great! And the composition is awesome. The attention is focused on the work of art. I would tone down the exposure a bit to have the work of art even more as centre of attention.
Good job Fred! :clap

digital faerie
Feb-27-2005, 03:34 PM
I really like the idea of the usage of DOF! It's great! And the composition is awesome. The attention is focused on the work of art. I would tone down the exposure a bit to have the work of art even more as centre of attention.
Good job Fred! :clap
:agree good job! :clap

gubbs
Feb-28-2005, 01:11 AM
I really like the idea of the usage of DOF! It's great! And the composition is awesome. The attention is focused on the work of art. I would tone down the exposure a bit to have the work of art even more as centre of attention.
Good job Fred! :clap
I agree, It's got everything, subject, artist, pencils and the result :clap:clap