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imax
Aug-18-2007, 03:25 AM
Unfortunately work comes before play but no excuses. Thanks for any input. To date the entries are fantastic, I don't think these compete but like I said pressed for time


Who's At The Door?


http://imax.smugmug.com/photos/185086779-L.jpg


Learning To Share


http://imax.smugmug.com/photos/185085542-L.jpg


Temptation


http://imax.smugmug.com/photos/185085058-L.jpg



Pulled the original, did some quick touchups and came up wih this.


http://imax.smugmug.com/photos/185250303-L.jpg

As the title stated pressed for time. Working double shifts for the next three days. It just might have to do. Anyway thanks for looking.




Joe

Felicia
Aug-18-2007, 08:10 AM
#3 made me laugh out loud. #1 is very interesting in combination with the title. I just wish it was a little lighter or there was more light on a little more of the dog's face. It took me a couple of seconds to figure out that it was a dog I was looking at.

So, I guess I'd vote for #3 because I got the message faster and more clearly. However, I think #1 has strong potential if it were just a little more illuminated.

Tentacion
Aug-18-2007, 08:20 AM
OH My..

I laughed SO much at 2 and 3, love them both, but wish the glass was not there in 2.

Love the look of 3, I can almost feel what that cat is thinking...great title to match the composition..

Number one looks so mysterious, but yet looks so BEWAREish...(My thought no catchlight in the eye especially with how the lighting is hitting that area, giving it the appearance of "deadeye", but in this case, that could probably work.) CUZ..... I would not want to be knocking on that door...LOL I think, I would love to see this with a hint of more lighting just to see/feel if the effect is the same...

Just my thoughts FWIW....Nice Work

I wish you the best of luck in whichever you choose....

Donna :clap

saurora
Aug-18-2007, 09:26 AM
These are great. I like them for all the same reasons as prior posts. Wish the drinking cup wasn't in the shot, would love to see the other cat's expression. I think # 1 has strong potential, but perhaps a little more pop to brighten what little info is there. I also like #3, I would clone out the goober, or whatever I am seeing in the cat's eye. I would choose whatever you feel is your best shot. Good luck to you!

saurora
Aug-18-2007, 04:28 PM
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HoofClix
Aug-18-2007, 05:12 PM
I saw your original, with the dog, thought it was great at the core, but needed clarity and brightness, and then got pulled off to dinner.... Now I see you did exactly the corrections I would have told you, and your entry is right on!

Tessa HD
Aug-19-2007, 06:54 AM
i love 'temptation'!

imax
Aug-19-2007, 10:26 PM
Thanks everyone for the input, hopefully next round I'll have more time. Thanks again....


Joe