My first swimsuit model shoot

[Danspage]

I found a group on Meetup.com for a Swimsuit model shoot. It was a blast and I came away with a few good photos. The cost was $25.00

What do you think?
http://danspage.smugmug.com/photos/183196274-L-3.jpg

This is prob better you think?
http://danspage.smugmug.com/photos/184695189-L.jpg

[Gary Glass]

At this size/distance she doesn't really look wet except for those beads on her arm, which you caught right between light and shadow, which is interesting. I would consider cropping the bottom of the photo and concentrating on the upper body to bring that out better.

Also, the saturation isn't working for me. You've pushed it so far that it looks almost cartoonish.

[Danspage]

At this size/distance she doesn't really look wet except for those beads on her arm, which you caught right between light and shadow, which is interesting. I would consider cropping the bottom of the photo and concentrating on the upper body to bring that out better.

Also, the saturation isn't working for me. You've pushed it so far that it looks almost cartoonish.

Yep I over sat lot. I need to work on that.

Thanks Gary