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Van Isle
Jun-27-2007, 02:33 PM
Getting better at this! Taking panning shots, handheld, and using faster glass.

Also fill flash using an SB800 unit in remote on a tripod for some of the shots. I'm starting to get more "pop" to the pics. (I'm also getting a better at intermediate tools in Capture NX!) This is all very exciting.

1.

http://mdrivest.smugmug.com/photos/167272071-L.jpg

2.

http://mdrivest.smugmug.com/photos/167271776-L.jpg

3.

http://mdrivest.smugmug.com/photos/167272415-L.jpg

Whaddya think? I'm constantly reading and reviewing Dgrin for more methods to shoot this stuff and I'm getting more and more ideas. Like practicing on random cars as they shoot past me on the street :thumb I'll be on that one this weekend!

Thanks for looking, C&C welcome and appreciated. I'm using a macbook(glossy) so it's really hard to say how much "pop" images actually have.

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mercphoto
Jun-28-2007, 01:28 PM
Number 1 is nice in composition but doesn't look too sharp. Either you didn't pan precisely enough or the focus is a touch off, or you didn't sharpen the image before posting. Lots of things could be the reason. Number 2 does nothing for me. Its just way too extreme a crop. Number 3 would be better if the rear wheel was not clipped off the photo. That's one detail you will get better at with more practice. Keep at it.

Rhuarc
Jun-28-2007, 02:39 PM
I think these look pretty good, but I would have two comments. The flash on #1 seems overwhelming. You can actually see sharp photos on parts of the bike from fenders, etc... The one with the close crop would work for me if the biker was on the right hand side of the shot looking to the left, with the handlebars and part of the front fork in view.

Overall though you got some nice looking shots! :clap

Van Isle
Jul-02-2007, 03:33 PM
thanks for the tips! Agree with the flash. I was using an SB800 off camera in manual mode and I'm still trying to figure it all out. Getting there in baby steps, though. And as for the sharpness, it's all about the panning. I need to work on that as well as using focus lock rather than trying to use auto focus. That's why I go every week! :thumb

VI