PDA

View Full Version : marie & alan


tiptonbloke
Jun-06-2007, 09:42 PM
comments please

Seneca
Jun-06-2007, 10:05 PM
This picture looks a little strange like you placed the groom by that tree; lik ehe's out of balance with the tree. :dunno

illuminati919
Jun-06-2007, 10:46 PM
Yea the fake DOF is not working here, I would just do without it.

Scott_Quier
Jun-07-2007, 02:33 AM
You've posed the bride and her gown very nicely. The groom looks a little uncomfortable/unsure about the photo experience. The composition of the shot is pretty good, though the tree truck is something of a distraction.

This is a tough shot from a lighting perspective. Her gown just shimmers and shines and is, thus, blown in a number of areas while the groom's tux appears plugged a bit.

Something about the background seems a little strange; the tree and the far background appear to be OOF to the same degree, resulting in an appearance that the B&G have been pasted into the scene. This look is further "supported" by the difference in light levels between the B&G and all of the background (even the tree that the groom appears to be leaning against).

I would love to see the original.