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pemmett
May-06-2007, 05:04 AM
Are any of these interesting enough to enter? :dunno

Please help....

#1
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/172/486326170_5fc3b21993.jpg

#2
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/223/486326098_f461a580b8.jpg

#3
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/217/486337730_8bfa12007d.jpg

#4
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/206/486357583_9d5598634c.jpg


Thanks for all and any feedback ...
BistiArt
May-06-2007, 06:14 AM
Are any of these interesting enough to enter? :dunno
Thanks for all and any feedback ...

#2 shows promise...

Unfortunately, the bright background limits the forming perceptions of the face in shadow, a delicate feature. Was the raw shot showing highlights?

Would some burning be more appropriate?
pemmett
May-06-2007, 07:06 AM
#2 shows promise...

Unfortunately, the bright background limits the forming perceptions of the face in shadow, a delicate feature. Was the raw shot showing highlights?

Would some burning be more appropriate?

Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately the RAW file is also pretty bright where the sun was, so there's not a lot I can do - except shoot it again of course :-)

Cheers/peter
richtersl
May-06-2007, 08:22 AM
Can you try brightening the background on #1? :scratch That would give a silhouette effect.

Or, try darkening the foreground of #2.

The other two don't really hit the mark for me.
pyroPrints.com
May-06-2007, 01:33 PM
I think #1 is the only that qualifies for the theme
pemmett
May-07-2007, 05:59 AM
Can you try brightening the background on #1? :scratch That would give a silhouette effect.

Or, try darkening the foreground of #2.

The other two don't really hit the mark for me.

Linda/PyroPrints,

Thanks for the feedback. Do you think that these two work?

#1
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/230/488229951_c7b903dd57_o.jpg

#2
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/232/488225234_4909572fd6_o.jpg
Tessa HD
May-07-2007, 06:09 AM
Out of these two, I prefer #2! What a sweet face!

Tessa
cabbey
May-09-2007, 09:28 PM
Do you think that these two work?

:nod

Both are gorgeous shots. I think I'd probably go for #1 myself, 'cause I just love the colors in it. Especially the glow that highlights her chin.
pyroPrints.com
May-09-2007, 09:38 PM
Linda/PyroPrints,

Thanks for the feedback. Do you think that these two work?

#1

#2


Both are gorgous shots. But #1 fits the theme better. Very nice!