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rundadar
Apr-26-2007, 05:56 AM
Few assorted street portraits/candids (in no particular order) - my first post in this forum, let's see how it goes ;)
Positive/negative critique is always welcome and appreciated.
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/145108131-L.jpg
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/98159742-L.jpg
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/133290567-L.jpg
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/101845304-L.jpg
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/120991670-L.jpg
Thanks for looking!
vangogh
Apr-26-2007, 06:15 AM
Love the first & last ones especially! Well done!! The last one has a feel of old time movies to me.
Scott_Quier
Apr-26-2007, 06:22 AM
Welcome to DGrin!
I really like this one
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/145108131-S.jpg
The composition really tells a story to me. And the light - nice. I'm wondering though if this isn't just a little dark, like maybe the exposure could be boosted about 1/2 stop?
I like the B&W conversion of this one:
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/98159742-S.jpg
But I think a little more contrast would boost it a bit. I would also have cropped it a little tighter, especially on the right side.
And this one
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/133290567-S.jpg
I don't see anything I would change on this one. This is one terrific image!
The last one
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/120991670-S.jpg
The guy looks like he was not at all pleased that you were pointing your camera at him. Again, a little more contrast and a boost of levels might improve this conversion a bit (but that's just MHO).
For whatever my vote is worth, these are some really fantastic images. Looking forward to seeing more!
rundadar
Apr-26-2007, 06:29 AM
Thanks for the comments!
Welcome to DGrin!
I really like this one
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/145108131-S.jpg
The composition really tells a story to me. And the light - nice. I'm wondering though if this isn't just a little dark, like maybe the exposure could be boosted about 1/2 stop?
I like slighty dark. Seriously.
I like the B&W conversion of this one:
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/98159742-S.jpg
But I think a little more contrast would boost it a bit. I would also have cropped it a little tighter, especially on the right side.
Well, it's a actually a joke (did you notice their shirts - the picture on one and the sentence on another?) :) So... I wanted to keep this shot real (less perfection/composition) - even the B&W conversion chosen is intentionally flat (panchromatic)
And this one
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/133290567-S.jpg
I don't see anything I would change on this one. This is one terrific image!
The last one
http://rundadar.smugmug.com/photos/120991670-S.jpg
The guy looks like he was not at all pleased that you were pointing your camera at him. Again, a little more contrast and a boost of levels might improve this conversion a bit (but that's just MHO).
For whatever my vote is worth, these are some really fantastic images. Looking forward to seeing more!
gmonkeh
Apr-26-2007, 11:10 AM
:agree with everything that Scott said. Welcome to Dgrin and im looking forward to seeing more of your work.
urbanaries
Apr-26-2007, 11:38 AM
these show an amazing range of style and quality. I love them all individually although I'd have to say the last is my favorite. It's simple and engaging, and leaves you with a bit of a question mark. Welcome!
rundadar
Apr-26-2007, 11:59 AM
Love the first & last ones especially! Well done!! The last one has a feel of old time movies to me.
Thank you :) Must be the hat and the bad shaving job ;)
rundadar
Apr-26-2007, 12:00 PM
:agree with everything that Scott said. Welcome to Dgrin and im looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Thanks for the welcome. Will do >)
rundadar
Apr-26-2007, 12:03 PM
these show an amazing range of style and quality. I love them all individually although I'd have to say the last is my favorite. It's simple and engaging, and leaves you with a bit of a question mark. Welcome!
Thanks!
dogwood
Apr-26-2007, 03:08 PM
Wow... these are really nice. There is character in every one of these shots. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.
saurora
Apr-26-2007, 08:54 PM
Welcome to Dgrin and wow, what a great first post! :clap
#1 Great composition - unique angle.
#2 Made me laugh!
#3 An all-out beautiful capture! (My fav)
#4 Funny! All the eyes! I like the direct eye contact (even though there's more than 2!!!)
#5 A strange expression, but an engaging image. Sure makes me wonder what he is thinking about.
judah
Apr-27-2007, 12:18 AM
Few assorted street portraits/candids (in no particular order) - my first post in this forum, let's see how it goes ;)
Positive/negative critique is always welcome and appreciated.
Thanks for looking!
Hi Rundadar,
really like them all, except #2. Very very nice candid shots, full of vibe. Maybe I'll try and take out that blue cast on the last one. Veyr well done in my opinion.
J.
rundadar
Apr-27-2007, 01:23 AM
Hi Rundadar,
really like them all, except #2. Very very nice candid shots, full of vibe. Maybe I'll try and take out that blue cast on the last one. Veyr well done in my opinion.
J.
Judah,
Thanks for your comments. But please don't take out the blue cast on the last one. It's a half-tone and was added on purpose during the B&W conversion.
Alex
judah
Apr-27-2007, 01:27 AM
Judah,
Thanks for your comments. But please don't take out the blue cast on the last one. It's a half-tone and was added on purpose during the B&W conversion.
Alex
Don't worry Alex, it was just a suggestion, I'm not gonna take out anything from your shots! :):
Are you somewhere from Europe?
Yuri Pautov
Apr-27-2007, 01:55 AM
I like all of them - each has its charachter...
Spasibo!
Yuri
rundadar
Apr-27-2007, 05:49 AM
Don't worry Alex, it was just a suggestion, I'm not gonna take out anything from your shots! :):
Are you somewhere from Europe?
From Israel, nowadays.
rundadar
Apr-27-2007, 05:50 AM
I like all of them - each has its charachter...
Spasibo!
Yuri
Vam Spasibo :)
Ted Szukalski
Apr-27-2007, 06:05 AM
Good variety in both approach and in the photographed subjects. First three images are particularly well done. Bravo!
rundadar
Apr-27-2007, 07:28 AM
Good variety in both approach and in the photographed subjects. First three images are particularly well done. Bravo!
Ted,
Thanks for the comment. Some great street shooting in your blog/gallery.
Cheers,
Alex
aiof
Apr-27-2007, 07:42 AM
Excellent photo I like 1st photo, but the remaining photo also good
rundadar
Apr-27-2007, 11:50 AM
Excellent photo I like 1st photo, but the remaining photo also good
Thank you!
DavidS
Apr-28-2007, 03:03 PM
These are great. I really enjoyed viewing them.
chopsky
Apr-28-2007, 03:46 PM
Wow. Yafeh m'od! :)
Ani rotzeh lirot harbey m'od.
Ok, my hebrew blows. But please do show more :)
Your pics are great.
rundadar
Apr-29-2007, 01:06 AM
These are great. I really enjoyed viewing them.
::)
rundadar
Apr-29-2007, 01:15 AM
Wow. Yafeh m'od! :)
Ani rotzeh lirot harbey m'od.
Ok, my hebrew blows. But please do show more :)
Your pics are great.
Thanks a lot, eh :) Your Hebrew is better than that of billions' of other people (it's an undeniable achievement to be better at something than billions of people!). And your Hebrew is better than my Hebrew 16 years ago :)
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