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chopsky
Apr-23-2007, 02:04 PM
hey guys

would love to hear your opinions on this spontaneous portrait of my cousin.

thanks
grant

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/174/463350218_e15417f870_o.jpg

Ted Szukalski
Apr-23-2007, 04:07 PM
Grant,
I like this portrait and the black and white conversion you have used. The light seems to be spot on. Some people may not like the angled view but I think in here it helps to fill the frame very well.

If I was picky I'd point out:
1. with the uniform background you could have safely increased the DOF
2. I personally dislike people constantly showing V of FO finger symbols, however once you've decided to include it you should have made sure whole hand is in the frame and possibly in focus (see #1)
3. In this particular case I'd make some post processing effort and mask out the bench or whatever he is sitting on out.

Elaine
Apr-23-2007, 04:14 PM
Great light! Like the angle! Love the conversion!

I would also remove the dark curved line in the upper right.

:clap

Elaine

DavidS
Apr-23-2007, 06:09 PM
Nice shot. I also love the angle and the conversion.

urbanaries
Apr-23-2007, 08:48 PM
Nice shot. I also love the angle and the conversion.

i agree. the light and texture make this image so interesting. echo what elaine said about the top right hand corner.

really great portrait, reminds me of Tmax. :lust

dogwood
Apr-23-2007, 10:22 PM
Nice candid shot, nice lighting, and nice expression. Definitely captures his personality (and I don't even know him!). :thumb