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jbr13
Apr-22-2007, 06:17 AM
Thanks for taking a look and offering a whip!
http://jbr.smugmug.com/photos/145771353-L.jpg
Gary Glass
Apr-22-2007, 07:25 AM
Out of focus and blurry. My eye roams around the frame looking for the subject.
Marc Muench
Apr-23-2007, 10:18 PM
I wish the entire background were as nice as the top part with its beautiful wispy tone!
pemmett
Apr-24-2007, 06:02 PM
Out of focus and blurry. My eye roams around the frame looking for the subject.
I agree. There isn't anything that grabs my attention. I think that the petals of the flower are in focus but there isn't much texture in the petals that can easily stop ones eye. The background seems a bit weird in the sense that it almost looks fake.
Try more depth of focus to get the whole flower in focus as this would give more area to catch the eye.
Nice looking flower though :D
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