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sanford tullis
Apr-08-2007, 07:55 PM
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Here is one from the my first day of shooting motocross

sanford tullis
Apr-08-2007, 07:59 PM
http://sanfordtullis.smugmug.com/photos/133474202-M-1.jpghttp://sanfordtullis.smugmug.com/photos/133474202-M-1.jpg

Here is one from the my first day of shooting motocross



http://sanfordtullis.smugmug.com/photos/139774051-M-1.jpghttp://sanfordtullis.smugmug.com/photos/139774051-M-1.jpg


And here is one from the last time I shot, 3 weeks later same jump, Can anyone give any advice on improvement?

BBones
Apr-09-2007, 12:16 AM
clone/heal the electrical wire out of the photo

nuff said

gus
Apr-09-2007, 12:31 AM
G'day stanford. Can you explain what you see is wrong so we can give you some specific advise to correct what you want advise on ?

Also we would really need to see the EXIF (shutter speed..aperture..lens length etc etc) info of the photo to be able to pinpoint more about the photo. The EXIF is avail on smugmug...just copy & paste it.

Lot of free good help avail in here & a lot of people that will happily point you in the right direction :thumb

Bodwick
Apr-09-2007, 07:13 AM
I messed about for a couple of min's and:
Put the pic level.
cloned the cable.
Cloned the bottom left light.
Dodged the bike down a bit.


It looks a bit like a pasted bike into a shot. I'd try and keep the wheels moving a bit to show motion. Less flash.

Is that what your looking for?

Bod.

jbr13
Apr-09-2007, 01:05 PM
First, I like the shots, they turned out good.

A few things that may make them better.
1. Try another angle, maybe to avoid the wire in the background.
2. Slow the shutter down a little. You want to get the tires to blur a little and any mud or dirt coming off to show motion. 600-800 Shutter speed if I remember correct should do the trick. This will also get rid of the look like the bike is pasted into the shot.


Have fun! It is a fun sport to shot. I can't wait to get back out and do somemore myself.

Jason

Mike02
Apr-09-2007, 01:50 PM
Cool photo, but flash is too obvious.

sanford tullis
Apr-09-2007, 09:07 PM
http://sanfordtullis.smugmug.com/photos/133474202-M-1.jpghttp://sanfordtullis.smugmug.com/photos/133474202-M-1.jpg

Here is one from the my first day of shooting motocross


http://www.sanfordtullis.smugmug.com/photos/newexif.mg?ImageID=133474202

sanford tullis
Apr-09-2007, 09:09 PM
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