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johno
Jan-27-2005, 07:45 PM
OK... Here is my first attempt, what do you think? Does it work?
http://www.youthimpact.com/photography/matchstick800-small.jpg

Remember, BE SAFE!

peace.
johno~

johno
Jan-28-2005, 10:41 AM
I guess by the sound of silence this my not be a good submission. :cry My wife won't let me have the lysol spray. :dunno :rofl

peace.
johno~

ginger_55
Jan-28-2005, 11:10 AM
lysol spray?

That is a good flame there. I think the match thing would be better if it were your son playing with them. Don't suppose your wife would like that, either.

ginger

Michiel de Brieder
Jan-28-2005, 11:20 AM
Hey I overlooked this one :D
Okay, to the photo!! I think the idea is very good! I like the composition alot, but there is one little thing that bugs me, that is the lack of the top of the flame.. I would have liked to have seen that included. The flame colours are terrific BTW!

DavidTO
Jan-28-2005, 11:34 AM
I guess by the sound of silence this my not be a good submission. :cry My wife won't let me have the lysol spray. :dunno :rofl

peace.
johno~

I think it's a good idea. The focal point seems to be forward of the match.

I like the idea, the wisps of smoke and the basic composition. Focus, focus, focus.

aero-nut
Jan-29-2005, 07:00 AM
Yeah, composition-wise I would suggest trying to capture the whole flame in the shot. Great idea!

landrum
Jan-29-2005, 02:58 PM
I agree with getting the whole flame in the shot. Either that or just crop it in tighter eliminating the extra black space. What do ya think? :dunno