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Jenny
Jan-19-2005, 06:37 PM
This is my first time trying a photo challenge so I suppose I will learn as I enter more of these.
judyfuess
Jan-19-2005, 08:07 PM
Welcome!!!Great start!! You may want to add some spacing between the pictures. At a first glance the last two seem to run into each other.

This is my first time trying a photo challenge so I suppose I will learn as I enter more of these.
wxwax
Jan-19-2005, 08:11 PM
:wave Hi Jenny. Playing in Challenges is stimulating, isn't it?

I like your idea. It's hard to go wrong with baby feet. I do find your image a little confusing, visually, not sure where to look first, no single box seems to really dominate. I also find the thumb crossover between the second and third boxes to be distracting, not sure if that's delieberate or not. You've made a great start, maybe play with it a little?
Relocin
Jan-19-2005, 10:05 PM
I agree with judyfuess. Try adding a bit more space between the photos.
Brett
Jan-20-2005, 05:14 AM
Like the others have said, more spacing between the photos would do a great thing to those pictures. I love the pictures though. Also maybe having a background to the pictures, probably the grey that surrounds the middle picture. I think it would look alot better once a few changes are made.
Roger
Jan-20-2005, 10:43 AM
Maybe it is worth trying a vertical arrangement.. ? :scratch

Roger
lynnma
Jan-20-2005, 10:53 AM
This is my first time trying a photo challenge so I suppose I will learn as I enter more of these.Hi Jenny.. big welcome:wave lovely little feet... kiss kiss.. I agree with Wxwx and the others that space between would isolate each shot and bring more focus..
Nice to have to with us.
lynnma
Jan-20-2005, 10:55 AM
I agree with judyfuess. Try adding a bit more space between the photos.Hey Relocin! did I say hi to you??? if not HI :wave I'm getting a bit senile in my old age AND repetative.. so I may come back at you again tomorrow with another hi!! :rofl
Jenny
Jan-21-2005, 09:56 AM
Thanks for all the input! I decided to try a different set of pictures all together, let me know what you think.
Jenny
Jan-21-2005, 10:25 AM
I think I'm going to add a border to seperate it from the rest of the page
Jenny
Jan-21-2005, 10:53 AM
ok, here it is with the border....
judyfuess
Jan-21-2005, 11:58 AM
Hi Jenny,
I like this set a lot better! I love the expressions, Great Job :thumb . The top two pictures look like they are overlapping, you may want to try to spread them out a little.
-judy
Jenny
Jan-21-2005, 12:15 PM
Thanks for the input Judy, here it is with the top two spread out a bit more.
judyfuess
Jan-21-2005, 12:57 PM
Hi Jenny,
I still see the overlap :scratch . I marked up a copy, i hope you don't mind.
Jenny
Jan-21-2005, 01:39 PM
Thanks Judy,now that I'm on a different computer I see what you mean....my monitor is really old and very dark in the resolution so I had no idea it was that bad.
judyfuess
Jan-21-2005, 01:50 PM
no problem :D These are great shots!!



Thanks Judy,now that I'm on a different computer I see what you mean....my monitor is really old and very dark in the resolution so I had no idea it was that bad.
Jenny
Jan-22-2005, 06:27 AM
ok, I think this is finally it.:clap Now that I've switched my monitor and actually have a decent resolution I think it's finally fixed. Let me know.
Ann McRae
Jan-22-2005, 07:15 AM
ok, I think this is finally it.:clap Now that I've switched my monitor and actually have a decent resolution I think it's finally fixed. Let me know.
Beautiful baby!

My suggestion would be to place the top photo on the bottom, middle becomes top and bottom the middle. I am thinking that the smiling photo is the feature photo and therefore in the middle would be great. I would move the other two to have the baby looking into the center photo.
Can't say for sure it would be better, but that is what my instinct says.

Its really nice - something to fram and keep for sure.

ann
judyfuess
Jan-22-2005, 09:29 AM
It looks a lot better! Great job! :thumb :thumb

ok, I think this is finally it.:clap Now that I've switched my monitor and actually have a decent resolution I think it's finally fixed. Let me know.
Jenny
Jan-23-2005, 07:07 AM
Beautiful baby!

My suggestion would be to place the top photo on the bottom, middle becomes top and bottom the middle. I am thinking that the smiling photo is the feature photo and therefore in the middle would be great. I would move the other two to have the baby looking into the center photo.
Can't say for sure it would be better, but that is what my instinct says.

Its really nice - something to fram and keep for sure.

ann
Thank you for your insight. I have thought about switching the pictures, maybe I will just for kicks and giggles and see how it looks. I like how it is now b/c it is a progression of her smile, and reaction to me. However, I really like the idea of the smile in the middle because artistically it is the eye grabber. hmmmm.......... this is one to ponder:scratch :dunno :scratch