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andycat
Feb-07-2007, 07:39 PM
Please critique.
http://andycat.smugmug.com/photos/128269852-L.jpg

gefillmore
Feb-08-2007, 12:34 AM
neat-

you definitely want to follow their gaze-

com3
Feb-08-2007, 11:34 PM
the picture seems really flat and lacks depth.

when people are looking at something, i tend to also use that cue for my "rule of thirds" ...i.e., i lead them in the direction they're looking.

Scott_Quier
Feb-09-2007, 04:02 AM
the picture seems really flat and lacks depth.

I think I agree - the shot could use a little more pop - or something to lend it a little more punch. The composition looks good to me, but I might have included a little more open space to the left other subjects - give them something into which to look.