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dugmar
Jan-09-2005, 03:31 PM
http://dugmar.smugmug.com/photos/13967591-L.jpg

Comments welcome.

Thanks, it's nice to be back.

-Doug
Tim Kirkwood
Jan-09-2005, 03:53 PM
Great idea!


I like it



Tim
wxwax
Jan-09-2005, 04:30 PM
I've been playing with this one. I'm thinking that it would work better shot in portrait orientation. I can't get a crop that works. Right now, the 'wings' of the shot seem distracting. I tried lowering their saturation and lightness, doesn't really seem to work. It's a good idea, but you might want to consider reshooting it, if you can.
GREAPER
Jan-09-2005, 04:47 PM
I agree, and I think it would be nice to get the top of the machine in. A verticle shot might be better.
muddyknees
Jan-09-2005, 07:05 PM
Maybe just make everything except the hands and center machine monochrome (make the top of center machine monochrome as well. (easy for me to say - I'm not gonna do it)

(Ok I just reread wxwax's comment and DOH! he's already tried that with the saturation-lowering - Oh well, I'll leave my redundant comment anyway) :wxwax

I've been playing with this one. I'm thinking that it would work better shot in portrait orientation. I can't get a crop that works. Right now, the 'wings' of the shot seem distracting. I tried lowering their saturation and lightness, doesn't really seem to work. It's a good idea, but you might want to consider reshooting it, if you can.