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Jigger
Dec-28-2006, 02:36 AM
Hi im new to digital photography and I am glad to be part of this forum. Just had my first Canon EOS 300D camera and still trying to understand the basic of photography. I would appreciate your comments and critics to better this image.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b60/jiggerf/02-1228-2006-1.jpg
urbanaries
Dec-28-2006, 05:14 AM
Hi im new to digital photography and I am glad to be part of this forum. Just had my first Canon EOS 300D camera and still trying to understand the basic of photography. I would appreciate your comments and critics to better this image.



For one of your first shots I'd say this is a great start. I like the composition, and the muted colors. I'm not fond of the distortion of her head, which comes from shooting at a wide angle closely....(see how her hand is about the same size as her mouth?)

I would suggest getting down on childrens' level. This is a little more effort but well worth the payoff.

Keep it up, love to see more of this cutie!
Seneca
Dec-28-2006, 05:18 PM
I agree the angel makes her head look much larger than her body. Try more shots of her...I think she's a beautiful little girl. :clap

Keep posting and welcome. I'm fairly new too.
RustingInPeace
Dec-29-2006, 05:41 PM
I like the lens distortion. I would like to see her moved a little to the left of frame.
Jigger
Jan-03-2007, 11:44 PM
I like the lens distortion. I would like to see her moved a little to the left of frame.


Hi i tried cropping her. I think this one looks ok now.. any suggestions?

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b60/jiggerf/baby-1.jpg