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Awais Yaqub
Nov-19-2006, 11:08 AM
I was sitting on my terrace in the end of the the day i got this hand held
i can try try it again. as these are mine :dunno
Sky in background it was my 1st try others were not cool.
i hope it is Silhouette i metered the sky ,and yeah i used Polarisor
http://awais.smugmug.com/photos/111382837-O.jpg
1/60
f 3.5
iso 80
Sony H5
18mm
Antonio Correia
Nov-19-2006, 02:46 PM
I like it Awais !
:thumb
The blue sky is nice and so is the conposition.
Go ahead with it !
:D:thumb
SloYerRoll
Nov-19-2006, 05:32 PM
Very creative shot Awais. I like it allot!
I don't really feel silhouette when I look at this shot though.
Just my .02
photogmomma
Nov-19-2006, 07:40 PM
Really cool shot! I think you may want to try cropping closer to only including the hinge and small section of the glass to capture the feel of "sihouette" more.
Great photo!
nalvarez
Nov-19-2006, 09:01 PM
Very nice and clean shot - very original!
Swartzy
Nov-19-2006, 09:03 PM
There are parts I am having trouble with....
1) The glass is transparent and larger than the frame/arms therefore takes away from the sillouette effect since the entire sky is blue
2) Because less than one half of the eye glasses are included in the shot, as a viewer, it didn't convey the "theme" to me as I had to really study the shot. Initial viewing was the sense of an "abstract".
3) This is an interesting shot but I know your eye and talent and believe you can do much better. This is my honest opinion as I respect your photographic ability.
JenGrace
Nov-20-2006, 08:13 AM
Interesting idea. The lens distracts me from the theme of the picture. I think a picture of just frames are part of the frame would convey the message better. :):
Awais Yaqub
Nov-20-2006, 12:03 PM
Thanks everyone i will try again :D
Art Scott
Nov-20-2006, 12:10 PM
Very cool Idea and I agree with others on composition.
Good luck
douglas
Nov-20-2006, 04:13 PM
This is a very cool shot, but my eyes keep focusing on the glass rather than the silhouette aspect.
ChrisJ
Nov-21-2006, 04:21 PM
This is a very cool shot, but my eyes keep focusing on the glass rather than the silhouette aspect.
Yep, I agree with this... I'm sure you'll come up with something better, Awais!
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