Lots of ideas, so little time

[Swartzy]

Actually, I really like this and thought I would send it out for some feedback. So.....should you want to help out a new grandpa (you read right!) it would be greatly appreciated. BTW, photos of grandson are forthcoming...never fear. Tanks!

http://Swartzy.smugmug.com/photos/111247525-L.jpg

[photogmomma]

You know what I'd LOVE to see in this shot? Several moving people like you have and ONE person truly enjoying what they're seeing. (The guy on the right does still have movement....) The others obviously talking on phones and completely distracted... I think it would make a bit more of a statement. Not sure if you can restage it, but just a thought.

I do like this shot the way it is, though! I really love the idea.

[Swartzy]

You know what I'd LOVE to see in this shot? Several moving people like you have and ONE person truly enjoying what they're seeing. (The guy on the right does still have movement....) The others obviously talking on phones and completely distracted... I think it would make a bit more of a statement. Not sure if you can restage it, but just a thought.

I do like this shot the way it is, though! I really love the idea.

Actually, no one is on a phone...they are all over their cameras taking photos of the Minneapolis skyline. The movement is resultant of timed exposure. Won't be able to stage this again as it was our local group together for a shoot at a particular location. This is why the title is "getting the shot". Thanks for your input! :lust

[nalvarez]

I really like it. Great silhouettes and very clear background as well.

[Awais Yaqub]

Nice try i liked it
i would have cropped the tree and 4 guys under it !

[Swartzy]

That is what I'm working on right now in fact. I didn't like the too much sky and wanted to bring the subjects in....Thanks..will fix.

Here it is:

http://Swartzy.smugmug.com/photos/111401798-L.jpg

[JenGrace]

I really like that version! :clap :clap

[douglas]

Great shot Swartzy, well done.