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Dramatapix®
Nov-12-2006, 08:44 AM
Looking for some C&C on a shot that I took at the NH State Championships on this grey fall morning. I shot them for a local paper.

http://brettmallard.com/popwarner/popwarnertouch.jpg

The rest can be found at http://www.dramatapix.com/gallery/2122486 if you are interested.

Andy
Nov-12-2006, 08:52 AM
Nice action. My only critique is that they could be upped, exposure-wise, by about a half-stop.

wmstumme
Nov-12-2006, 08:57 AM
I really like the shot--except for the Ref being so close to the center of the action. I don't think you could crop him out and still have a balanced image.

However--despite the gray day, it is still very sharp and I like the colors...

Will

Dramatapix®
Nov-12-2006, 09:01 AM
Thanks Andy...

I took your suggestion:

http://brettmallard.com/popwarner/popwarneredit%20%20269.jpg

Dramatapix®
Nov-12-2006, 09:03 AM
Will~

Yeah, I didn't like that either, but I had to run to the end zone as it was to get this shot. It was actually a drive into the end zone for a touchdown. Again, would have preferred it without the ref as well. :(

Andy
Nov-12-2006, 09:40 AM
Thanks Andy...


Much better. The parents will thank you, the prints will be better :D